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Dojo (defuse map)

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I'm working on a CS:GO defuse map and I'm looking for layout feedback.

Notes:

  • Map includes sliding door on A site.
  • I'm gonna only put latest map here. All other screenshots are in the later posts.

Edits:

  1. Edit 1
    1. Major change on enterance to A site.
    2. Added backlane on B site.
  2. Edit 2
    1. Remade dojo.
    2. Remade A site scheme.
  3. Edit 3
    1. Remade long and B site.
    2. Remove alley next to A site.
  4. Edit 4
    1. Redesigned CT area.

Download link -> workshop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Edited by Marcin Poloczek

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Not bad, but it lacks cover, its kinda small and those long boring pathways are kinda nah. Try to make them more curved not that straight. Gl with the map tho

Maybe something like this:

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or this:

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Edited by TECHNICKER

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1 hour ago, TECHNICKER said:

Not bad, but it lacks cover, its kinda small and those long boring pathways are kinda nah. Try to make them more curved not that straight. Gl with the map tho

Maybe something like this:

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or this:

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Thx for your response. The problem with your suggestions is that those remove rotation possibility between sites. Hopefuly the map will be accepted to the playtest and we will see soon.

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11 minutes ago, Marcin Poloczek said:

Thx for your response. The problem with your suggestions is that those remove rotation possibility between sites. Hopefuly the map will be accepted to the playtest and we will see soon.

If you look closely on the second one you will see that I drew a connector between Left site T entrance and mid.

BTW: I've got an idea how to make rotates from one site to the other one faster and make the game a little bit more fast paced. Iam not on PC right now so I will send it tommorow.

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1 minute ago, TECHNICKER said:

If you look closely on the second one you will see that I drew a connector between Left site T entrance and mid.

BTW: I've got an idea how to make rotates from one site to the other one faster and make the game a little bit more fast paced. Iam not on PC right now so I will send it tommorow.

Oke, I've added you on steam, I also have some stuff regarding your map but I have to send you a picture so I added you instead of leaving the comment.

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Wow , i love your map , especially the bomb site B , But I find the middle too small and the ways to A a little boring 

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The Dojo is really cool . I really like the hole for the grenades 

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I wait impatiently the final release !

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4 minutes ago, LeCaribou said:

Wow , i love your map , especially the bomb site B , But I find the middle too small and the ways to A a little boring 

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The Dojo is really cool . I really like the hole for the grenades 

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20190506173324_1.jpg.0ce7d510e5431e69b0357432b20d0169.jpg

I wait impatiently the final release !

That "grenadehole" is just an leftover from prev versions where it was an actual site entrance.

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41 minutes ago, LeCaribou said:

Wow , i love your map , especially the bomb site B , But I find the middle too small and the ways to A a little boring 

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20190506173927_1.jpg.db44e76f33ebf0edbb23dd18a81279ab.jpg

The Dojo is really cool . I really like the hole for the grenades 

  Reveal hidden contents

20190506173324_1.jpg.0ce7d510e5431e69b0357432b20d0169.jpg

I wait impatiently the final release !

The B site was a little redesigned but I will include the hole for the grenades. The problem with B site was that it was too small and not enjoyable to go there.

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2 hours ago, Marcin Poloczek said:

The B site was a little redesigned but I will include the hole for the grenades. The problem with B site was that it was too small and not enjoyable to go there.

Strangly , I prefer the B site than the A site , the Connector mid to B is really nice and the way to go to B is cool 

In A , the corridor to go and the mid is to short but it is my opinion

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1 minute ago, LeCaribou said:

Strangly , I prefer the B site than the A site , the Connector mid to B is really nice and the way to go to B is cool 

In A , the corridor to go and the mid is to short but it is my opinion

The site itself is quite bad.

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6 minutes ago, Marcin Poloczek said:

The site itself is quite bad.

Maybe the first ceilling is too low ( you can't make a jump without to hit the ceilling and make a second entrance around the dojo to rejoin the road like this with some crates or walls :

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