Citadel (WIP)(GreyBox)

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Hello everyone,

 

My name is DutchCrazyGamer and i recently started with mapping. I really enjoy it but for my last map i did not get that much feedback from experienced mappers so when it got reviewed i saw all sort of things that could be better (it was made for the mapcore 2018 wingman contest). That is why i came here for feedback so i can improve my mapping skills. Here is a link to the map https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1598100309 and here is an link to the imgur showcase: https://imgur.com/a/gNIXeUn . Hope you like it and all feedback is welcome.

 

Greetings, 

 

DutchCrazyGamer.

It turned out that my post was submitted 3 times due to an error with the site.

[Apeyou]

First thing I noticed is the lighting seems very dark. I'd recommend this website for the right light_environment settings. The layout itself looks a little uninspired, based purely on the screenshots. I'll try to give more in depth feedback after I played the map. Good start though

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Thank you, yeah the lighting is a bit dark. I will fix that later.

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Added some environmetal lighting

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Some more screenshots. 

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Updated my map a bit. Added some doors to B site and suffused the paths that will become the cave system.

 

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Shaped the main building of my map (b site).

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Started with texturing the outside of the map.

[DutchCrazyGamer]

Added a (temporary) overview for my map for an upcomming playtest.