grapen 1,187 Report post Posted July 10, 2017 (edited) Edit: last update sep 2018 http://www.grapensparr.com/ It's fully responsive, but best viewed on desktop given the nature of it. Don't hold back. Edited November 16, 2018 by grapen 7 maxlevelboi, gav, Roald and 4 others reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Roald 640 Report post Posted July 30, 2017 I like it! It's clean, simple and to the point. When you hover over the image you see the map name and your role, maybe you can also add what game it is made for? 1 grapen reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alf-Life 123 Report post Posted August 20, 2017 I like the site. It's a bit odd that the box to the right is grey (at least for me). Seems like you've only done 1 map and so I would put that front and centre and not even have people click it until you have more. The map itself looks interesting, in this day and age I would just have a large YouTube playthrough video playthrough or trailer of the map there instead of the screenshots. 1 grapen reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
grapen 1,187 Report post Posted August 23, 2017 On 8/20/2017 at 11:01 AM, Alf-Life said: It's a bit odd that the box to the right is grey (at least for me). Seems like you've only done 1 map and so I would put that front and centre and not even have people click it until you have more. On 7/10/2017 at 11:21 PM, grapen said: The gray image is there purely to show the grid to you guys (as I only have one project to show right now). Won't be sending it to recruiters for a while, it's like you say, needs more projects up there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
grapen 1,187 Report post Posted February 4, 2018 Time for an update! Slimmed it down to basically (almost) a one-pager. 3 Logic, Fnugz and poLemin reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maxlevelboi 92 Report post Posted March 13, 2018 I really like the way you have evolved the web page : )! And the levels are hella good as well 1 grapen reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheOnlyDoubleF 1,099 Report post Posted May 16, 2018 I agree with the good and simple visual point from the people above. Yet, what I don't like is the fact that I don't have any information about your design process, no overview of the map and most of all no video showing how the level is played, how is the navigation etc. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
grapen 1,187 Report post Posted May 17, 2018 17 hours ago, TheOnlyDoubleF said: and most of all no video showing how the level is played, how is the navigation etc. Yeah I’ve been pretty lax in regards to video presentation, I will try and get into that eventually as I got my hands full right now. Thanks for the feedback! 1 TheOnlyDoubleF reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vilham 1,154 Report post Posted May 17, 2018 Top downs are far more important than a video tbh, you should always show a top down where you can. 2 TheOnlyDoubleF and grapen reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites