Josh Broughton - Junior Level Designer

[Joshiraptor]

Hey guys, hoping I could get some crit on my work. Have built my website based on some industry members reccomendations but any help would be greatly appreciated <3

 

http://www.joshuarbroughton.com

 

Also, mobile view is messed up right now so check it out on a PC

Edit: After re-reading the rules, I want to state I am looking for work right now, cheers for checking my thread out

Edited January 19, 2017 by Joshiraptor

[Radu]

Your love for design really shows. The site is clean and functional(or it will be completely functional once you sort out the mobile view). I like the "comp" page the most. It offers an equal amount of images and text. Videos are cool too, but I doubt many people will take the time to watch them through; same thing goes for long texts. I think the strongest portfolio piece you have is the work you did on Rally Bug Turbo. You should add 3-4 final in-game images on it's page.

[Joshiraptor]

Thanks man, that's really good to hear. I wanna focus on mobile once the pictures/text is sorted, the video under showreel is more for if I wanted to show my portfolio at a networking event and people don't have the time to read anything or I'm present to speak to. The video for Rally Bug Turbo is the trailer we produced to advertise the product - so a taster I guess

The long text came from speaking to industry people, the way they explained it was the mythbusters "It's only science if you write it down" idea, so the same for design - I have to be able to communicate my ideas. Therefore the videos and pictures are for a quick view and if it catches their eye then there is some substance to read.

I will definitely add some more finished pictures to the RBT page, want to build some breakdown for it too. Thanks for the crit and taking the time to check it out!

[Radu]

I don't know if you've seen this before, but you should definitely check it out 

 

[Sentura]

your linked in link does not seem to function

[Joshiraptor]

Was about to say it works for me but checked the actual link and its my view of the profile not public.  D'oh!
Thanks man!