[WIP] De_Lojus [CS:GO]

[Lolko123]

Hey!

de_Lojus is my first map and its small map but I want to get feedback to have my next map better

All feedback are welcome!

Download : http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=628780409

Sorry for bad english

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T want destory industrial zones can CT stop them? 

Edited April 28, 2016 by Lolko123

[Lolko123]

Added some screenshots...

A site

b site

mid with window

way to A

hangar B

Edited April 27, 2016 by Lolko123

[Plat]

The detailing is actually pretty good for a first map. It definitely has a defined (generic) theme but it's well enforced. One thing that immediately occurs to me is the architecture, it's very blocky. The walls look too flat, everywhere. Generally speaking it's good to add things that jut in and out to give your map some depth and keep it from looking so flat. Another thing lacking from the map is verticle detail. A lot of the buildings have very similar heights and look very plain near the top.

Overall it's a pretty great first map, and I encourage you to continue working on it, adding details as you go. Keep it up man!

[Lolko123]

Thanks! I really appreciate your comment.

[Vaya]

One thing I can tell just from the screenshots is you need to diversify your bombsites! both are just squares with cover in the middle. Compare these to any map in the game- operation or otherwise

[Malle]

I would like to see picture reference in this map, floor and walls seem too unrealistic and square. try to use displacements on the ground

[Lolko123]

I dont have picture reference I make it in my mind

[Lolko123]

Hey after 3 months of doing nothing I came back and make some things on my map...

There they are.

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- Changed ugly metal building to this brick building

 

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- Little change bombsite B to make it larger

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- Changed littlebit mid

- Pushed back T and CT to slow game littlebit

 

Edited July 1, 2016 by Lolko123

[Lolko123]

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- Detailed CT spawn littlebit

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- Detailed A secret

 

Little update for today...

[Lolko123]

Another little update :

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- Detailed CT Spawn

 

[Lolko123]

- Changed metal building on mid and change it to this brick build

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Look from bombsite B 

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Look from mid

 

 

[Lolko123]

REMAKED WAREHOUSE

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- View from A bombsite

- Also added opened to set up grenades

 

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Point of view from inside

 

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View from T spawn

 

Edited July 6, 2016 by Lolko123
Accidentally added picture what i didnt wanted to add 2

[Lolko123]

- Changed mid little bit to make B harded to take and also detailed it

- Added one way drop from mid to A to slow down rotations from A to B

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Edited September 1, 2016 by Lolko123
1 image deleted