Max Forsberg - Level Designer

[maxlevelboi]

Heya I am going to be applying for internship within a months time and I need to make sure my portfolio will stand the test! : -)!

Don´t hold back, if anything annoys you tell me : -) It is a work in progress but I feel as if feedback won´t hurt!

 

maxforsberg.se

 

Feel free to add me on steam if you want to discuss the portfolio

Edited April 4, 2016 by maxlevelboi

[ng.aniki]

I really like your video about the counter-strike map, really interesting to know more about your process. It's a very good point in my opinion.

About your Work In Progress:
-If there is no content at all, remove the whole picture from your portfolio, or make it hidden to the visitor.
-If there is content, either remove it completely if you are not satisfied by the quality, or replace the big black picture by a nice one. No one should see those pictures: No one will come regularly on your portfolio to see if you added something for those black vignettes.

[maxlevelboi]

1 hour ago, ng.aniki said:

I really like your video about the counter-strike map, really interesting to know more about your process. It's a very good point in my opinion.

About your Work In Progress:
-If there is no content at all, remove the whole picture from your portfolio, or make it hidden to the visitor.
-If there is content, either remove it completely if you are not satisfied by the quality, or replace the big black picture by a nice one. No one should see those pictures: No one will come regularly on your portfolio to see if you added something for those black vignettes.

Thanks man : -D! Going to fix this right now!

[spence]

The looped gifs when you hover over the images are a great touch, love it. 

Make sure that the content/body of each page has the correct information which you wish to convey. I think all but one of the pages I visited had at least one paragraph or section which looks like it belongs on the page for your CS:GO level. I'm guessing you're using one page as a 'template' and then copying/modifying it when you add a new project to your portfolio? Nothing wrong with this, but if you haven't written the content for each different project and the pages are not complete, then make them inaccessible until they are complete, as noted above. 



 

Edited April 9, 2016 by spence

[maxlevelboi]

On 2016-04-09 at 10:52 PM, spence said:

The looped gifs when you hover over the images are a great touch, love it. 

Make sure that the content/body of each page has the correct information which you wish to convey. I think all but one of the pages I visited had at least one paragraph or section which looks like it belongs on the page for your CS:GO level. I'm guessing you're using one page as a 'template' and then copying/modifying it when you add a new project to your portfolio? Nothing wrong with this, but if you haven't written the content for each different project and the pages are not complete, then make them inaccessible until they are complete, as noted above. 



 

I will updatethe texts tomorrow to adress the issue : -)! Thanks for checking out my portfolio and leaving feedback!

[blackdog]

On the Aqueduct page I see the Unity project as the first screenshot (on the left of "Goals and Achievements")

[maxlevelboi]

On 4/12/2016 at 1:08 AM, blackdog said:

On the Aqueduct page I see the Unity project as the first screenshot (on the left of "Goals and Achievements")

Thanks man I got it fixed : -)!

 

Also my portfolio got a rework check it out www.maxforsberg.se : -)

Edited April 19, 2016 by maxlevelboi

[Alf-Life]

I just skimmed it but first impression was very good, one of the strongest layouts I've seen for a portfolio site! Liked the YouTube links and all the description and screenshots! Very nice. Will look at it again once I've had some sleep.

[maxlevelboi]

On 5/24/2016 at 10:21 AM, Alf-Life said:

I just skimmed it but first impression was very good, one of the strongest layouts I've seen for a portfolio site! Liked the YouTube links and all the description and screenshots! Very nice. Will look at it again once I've had some sleep.

Thanks man :D! <3