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  • 1 year later...

hello wanderer, 

may I stop you just for a minute, to tell you the tales of the seemingly fantastic? An ancient map long forgotten about ... 

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young fellow, have you ever heard of  

*thunder rolls in the distance*

 ... oakwood?

Ah yes, a fine young map, much like you, ages ago, that went out to seek an adventure.

...

It had been raised fantastically by the always well-meaning community of its little town, Mapcore. But Oakwood wasn't yet done with what it wanted to see, wanted to do, to become. And so it left one night in their sleep. 

 

Today many don't know of it, but those who do, still wonder, whatever may have happened to it ...

But I, young fellow, I have seen it, and from here on out, I am here to share my stories with you: 

 

after the short storytime which I hope you all enjoyed: it's been too long ... but I'm back! And I am so glad to be! After more than an entire year of intense personal life problems, I have finally picked myself up again and gathered enough energy to pursue this ancient project of mine. Not to say there hasn't been any activity on my end regarding it though.

Some of you may have seen my post in the lands many thought only existed in legends, the place noone has ever seen, except for those courageous enough to walk off the road and step into the mapping swamp's *flat* waters. Yes, I am talking about the

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2D Forums

But here it is, in case you missed it:

much of what I presented there has already changed again, but it can give you a rough idea of where I want to take this project.

One of the overhauled areas is A with its Long entrance, always a favorite place of mine. So without further ado: here is a little peek at the overhauled A site and surrounding area.

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I hope you enjoy! Definitely let me know what you think, I am super eager for feedback on the new visuals! 

Cheers and hope you have a great rest of the night!

Quentin

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On 1/10/2018 at 2:03 AM, Freaky_Banana said:

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Not sure what kind of feedback on the visuals you expect for a greybox, but for some reason I expect the left curved wall and/or the ceiling to be made of glass to let the natural light flood in that area?

I liked the theme you had going on the previous screenshots and I'm glad to see you pick this project up again, looking forward to the release! 

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5 hours ago, mryeah said:

 

Not sure what kind of feedback on the visuals you expect for a greybox, but for some reason I expect the left curved wall and/or the ceiling to be made of glass to let the natural light flood in that area?

I liked the theme you had going on the previous screenshots and I'm glad to see you pick this project up again, looking forward to the release! 

hey, thanks a ton for the compliment on previous screenshots! 

Concerning the visual feedback, after I read your comment I realised that "visuals" is not what I wanted the feedback on. As you said yourself I feel like the previous' iteration's visuals worked quite well for my theme. What didn't work well for me was creating believable architecture that still functioned well as a CSGO map. That is the problem I am trying to tackle with this new version of de_oakwood. 

In that light, I think it's best, if I rephrase my question for "feedback on the new architecture." Thanks for pointing out this error!

Regarding the glass walls, it may be tough making the walls glass, since this part of the map will be inside a hillside, but the roof can definitely get a few slits here an there :) !

Also I made a little bit of progress: 

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There is a little bit more, but that doesn't feel presentable yet. Right now I am looking to fix superlong sightlines in CT Spawn and create a fun to play B bombsite.

Cheers!

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  • 1 year later...

Necroposting coming in. After all the revivals I have attempted on this topic ... I guess this is the Frankenstein's monster of threads :oscar:

Anyways, once again I have redone almost all of the map. I took it all back to a greybox stage complete with redesigning the layout. After ridiculous amounts of time spent alone in my room, and drawing insipiration from all the traveling I am fortunate to get to do, I am now finally content to put v_36 out for a playtest! I hope all the best of this initial greybox comes across in the screenshots.

 

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The playtest will be taking place this Sunday and I appreciate all participation  :)

Cheers people, see you then.

Workshop link: https://steamcommunity.com/workshop/filedetails/?id=1693753275

The playtest will take place on Sunday and I appreciate all participation :).

Cheers people, see you then.

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7 hours ago, Interfearance said:

Sexy displacement work. However, piles of brown leaves next to green trees can ruin the outdoor immersion and confuse the player thematically.

Hey, thanks on the compliment! And not to worry, no trees or leaves on the new map for now, but their colors will be more along these lines in the finished map:

Unfortunately I just have zero experience with 3D modeling or custom textures so I wasn't able to reskin the Valve trees. Just another thing I will have to learn for this project :v .

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Unfortunately I just have zero experience with 3D Modeling or selfmade textures, so I wasn't able to reskin the Valve trees. Just another thing I will have to learn for this project :v 

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Hello people, 

today is the day of the playtest! Whoever wants to experience what another year of redevelopment turned into shall gladly join me at 8 pm CEST on the MapCore Playtesting-server at the IP: 185.62.204.12:27035

I look forward to seeing all of you there, before we can collectively huddle back up with our loved ones and eagerly await the final episode of Game of Thrones! 

 

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A big thank you to everyone who participated in the playtest!

I have begun looking into all of the great feedback you left for me and will work out the new layout changes as soon as possible. For now I am happy most of you seem to have enjoyed the map, and am looking forward to further updates and playtests in this thread, whenever I next find the time to do them :).

And @Logic thanks for the picture! I will address all of those issues in the next update.

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  • 8 months later...

Still not dead.
A new version is pending workshop verification, I will add the link once it's done on the workshop right now! Let's get to the screenshots and I will explain what changed:

Workshop link! https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1693753275

 

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PLEASE NOTE: This is all very clearly a WIP! My main purpose right now is to get a layout down (after about 4 years now ^^). 

First up: The radar

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I know this looks very complex. But if you think about it, it is actually just a clover layout with two major additions.
A) The skywalk connecting the two bombsites creates an incredibly potent, direct rotate option where normally there is none. This exists, because defenders on this map are already very spread out, and the more complex geometry of the main paths is a big obstacle to clear for efficient rotations. Skywalk alleviates a lot of this pressure for perfection from defending CTs and makes the gameplay a bit faster pace, which I also enjoy.
B) The lower middle area on T-side. This plays to a similar point as skywalk, where the level geometry is very unforgiving for being on the wrong side of the map. Additionally, the lower mid area is essentially supposed to make movement feel more fluid and free across the level.

 

The bombsites:

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I widened A (as per @Logic and others' feedback) and thought about how to make the door in Long A integrate better into the site, making it a more comfortable approach for the Ts. The solution is what you see above. The door is now nested in what is an appendix to the circular site itself, with a better initial angle for dueling the defending CT, as well as a small area shielded from view behind the curve of the wall (which is however openly visible to the main defense spots inside the site). 
In the playtest a lot of you also commented on how contrived and bad the entire A Main structure and approach felt, so I changed it. Above you can see the main defense angle for an early warning on an A-Main push. This is also clearly visible when rifling. As seen in the last picture, I also changed around the position and size of the semicircle desk and removed other clutter from the site. 

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In B I opened up the space above the B Main entrance to site, using this opportunity to further expand the balcony running along the backwall. Over B Main it meets up with the new additional, elevated entrance into the site. Ts can reach this position by jumping on the boxes visible in the bottom left corner in the first picture, three jumps required. Further I added the server defense position visible in the back of both pictures, specifically with afterplant scenarios in mind, but if you are feeling yourself as a CT you can use it to risk a peek into Long B (timings are really tight and you're exposed on the exit). 
Actually forgot to take pictures of lower B tunnels area (might add later), that changed a little bit as well. but in general I moved the CT-side lower entrance from under skywalk to the end of the tunnel (under heaven). This again makes the angles much more pleasant for both sides, enabling cleaner sweeps both for takes and retakes (so from both sides, north and south). Also there is now a cool dueling line from heaven into the area where Ts enter B Main. T-side smokes can fairly effectively eliminate angles of defense, forcing CTs to play smart or adjust their position.

Thirdly, the connectors:

 

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1): A Main connector into T topmid. Kind of uninspired (also the shape is much too square for A side, but better than everything else I could come up with). Hoping to make this one a tube, if it keeps its current layout.
2): Lower mid ladder into T-controlled B side. As said before really helps rotations, also a high risk high reward push for CTs who bu*rush mid. Geometry down here feels too complex, but not sure, so I want to test it with you guys ^^. But I already have a plan for simplification in mind, in case we need it. Might actually solve the issues I have with the feeling and sightlines of lowermid, so anything is possible.
3) and 4): the new connector into A Short from mid. As also visible in pic 4) I closed the left side of the ring-around-the-pillar, instead placing a spiral stairway inside a cylinder there. This change allows Ts to direct their focus toward the window and solitary floor-level defense position, instead of the overwhelming three spots they had to keep tabs on before. It also streamlines the mid for defending CTs, who can push and reclaim mid with much less fear of being shot in the back of the head now than before. It also involves the player playing skywalk in a more direct manner by providing another angle, if he gets smoked out or forced back. Lastly in this constellation there is a direct nade line (however not sightline!) for kobes, smokes or popflashes thrown by the A player into mid, or for Ts to gain control of A Short with a smoke from a pushed up position in mid.

Rest:

 

CT Spawn

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Just because I think it's pretty :) (There is also a few more out of date but nice pictures in the general WIP thread, if you want to see more.)       

Visual and optimization notes: I use a 3d skybox, but the entire surrounding is a mockup. Probably the mountains would be lower to let in more light and allow a better view of the skybox colors. Also keep in mind that I didn't figure out any of the visuals yet (I have different ideas, but didn't decide). So you are more than welcome to comment on what you might like or dislike about current visuals on the map! Outside I will still be going for an Indian Summer look.

Hope you all enjoyed! Please check the level out in game (once the workshop is up), there is a bunch I didn't cover here. 

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  • 2 months later...

Update: I want to register this map for a playtest at the end of this month, but before I do that I wanted to draw on all of your guys' collective wisdom in picture form. Three questions I want asking are:

1. What do you think about the new T-side lowermid and the paths to which it is connected?

2. Should the doorway from B CT-side heaven to skywalk be closed up?

3. Is A a good size? This is important because it informs the design of A Main, A Long and the mid-to-A stair chokepoint. (for this one you will probably have to hop in-game at: https://steamcommunity.com/workshop/filedetails/?id=1693753275, there is unfortunately no way to really substitute that with pictures, but there are some included down here). 

These are hopefully easy to answer questions with a big knock-on effect for how the map will feel and play in a playtest. I hope to iron these uncertainties out now, so that when the time comes we can make the most of the playtest. And finally - pictures:

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Lowermid:

 

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(And the connecting area between A Main, T mid and the outside path of Long A:) 

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A Site:

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