De_Front [Need Feedback!]

[Jakubshark]

This is a map that I've been working on for the past two weeks and I just wanted to Show you guys on mapcore and get some feedback! This is a casual or competitive map based in a industrial snowy area with 2 bombsites! This my second map.

 This is the Workshop Link: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=574633806

Edited December 14, 2015 by Jakubshark

[TooProForYahoo]

Do you have an overview? If so please post it here

[Jakubshark]

[TooProForYahoo]

What I can see is that you have all 90 degree turns. try to change out your angles to its not all equal throughout the map.

Edited December 15, 2015 by TooProForYahoo
Grammar errors

[Quotingmc]

B -Bombsite seems really small and tight. I would try enlarging it or removing some of the props.

[Jakubshark]

Thank you for the Feedback

Hey Tooproforyahoo do you have any more tips?

[TooProForYahoo]

Thank you for the Feedback

Hey Tooproforyahoo do you have any more tips?

Move A site further from CT spawn, it seems like the rotate timings for CT are really close. you can also watch their exit on B from A site.

The lighting also seems too warm.. consider turning down the yellow and making it white with a tint of blue, and have nice contrasting shadows. 

Have you gotten your map playtested as well?

Edited December 15, 2015 by TooProForYahoo
More feedback

[Jakubshark]

I still have not gotten my map playtested. Thanks for the feedback

[Aztk]

Make a B quite bigger, add some positions for CTs and remove crates 

pozdrawiam polskę ;p

[Jakubshark]

Thank you Aztk for the feedback !!!

[Aztk]

Teams haven't got buzyones, bombsites don't work.

Edited December 20, 2015 by Aztk

[Jakubshark]

That was fixed a while ago you can try it now!

[TooProForYahoo]

I see that you updated the map, I'll take a look at it when I get home. Are you sticking with the name de_front as well?

[Jakubshark]

Yes, I guess I am unless you have a better name!

[Jakubshark]

Hey guys am I doing something wrong with mapping? I feel like I'm making things incorrectly