Shea Lane - 3d artist

[SheaLane]

Hello,

I'm in the process of overhauling my portfolio and I'm looking for any advoice I can get.

I've got updates coming within a week. Specifically, all the unfinished work in the 3d section will be updated with finished versions as well as some additional 3D work. Having just looked through some of the advice given for other portfolios, I can already see some changes I need to make, Hopefully, my abilities will be much better represented once my portfolio has been updated, but since I'm getting close, I'd like to get the dialogue started.

Any critiques, comments, or advice would be much appreciated!

http://shealane.levelism.com/

Edited August 5, 2015 by TheSheaButterFactory

[Pampers]

you should probably remove that huge dick dude

[SheaLane]

Yeah, I wasn't sure about that.

To be fair, it's not meant to be sexual and, in context, hopefully it seems less vulgar. It's a homunculus and the title character of a game I've been working on. A homunculus is used in neuroscience and psychology. From Wikipidia, "The homunculus is commonly used today in scientific disciplines such as psychology as a teaching or memory tool to describe the distorted scale model of a human drawn or sculpted to reflect the relative space human body parts occupy on the somatosensory cortex". The game is about a crazy guy trying to get away from his homunculus and sever his sensory tie with the real world... because he's crazy and can't handle the real world.

Given that sex is such a huge part of psychology and neuroscience, I seemed wrong not to give him a dick, and not to give him a big dick.

Looking at the things you can do in games these days(GTA comes to mind), is nudity an issue?

Is this too obscene? 

Edited August 5, 2015 by TheSheaButterFactory

[Pampers]

the person reviewing your profile will do it at work and might be more worried about the ramifications of having a huge schlong on his monitor rather than the background and context of it being there

[SheaLane]

Good point. I hadn't thought of that.

[SheaLane]

Thanks for the help!
I just updated my portfolio. Any feedback would be great.

There are more updates to come!

Edited August 10, 2015 by SheaLane

[SheaLane]

I've done some more updates.

How does it look?

Is this an employable level of work?

Should I make any changes?

[SuperDuperYeah]

Hey dude ! 

There's one thing that comes up for me. I have no idea what you actually do... do. I know your name is Shea Lane, but if you are an environment artist or a concept artist is a little bit hard for me to discover. The thing is I shouldn't even try to guess it should right in my face so there's no confusion.