[WIP] DE_Lojus

[Lolko123]

This map is in Industrial zone with some offices. You need to defend it!

I take inspiration from Mirage and Dust2.

Screenshots from map is on the workshop.

If you want download and rate check this link : >> http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=456722982 <<

 

Bombside B ( with vent )

Bombsite A (with vent )

Middle

Hangar B

Hangar A

CT Spawn

T Spawn

Apartments

Market and then Long A

Long A ( Boosteble vent )

Long B ( with vent )

Secret to B

Middle window ( with vent )

Edited July 1, 2015 by Lolko123

[Tensei]

Gennerally, this map hasnt any chances of being good as it is now. First the layout is almost just same as mirage.

Second. Architecture theme changes by meters.

I don't find it interesting - honestly.

[jackophant]

That mid window/vent screams mirage at me. You say industrial zone with some offices, yet I see plaster, with office tiled ceilings and green spaces with nice fencing and then chinese lanterns underground with barrels and stacks of hay? wut?

Your map has an identity crisis which urgently needs addressing, but I also fear your layout is a little off... Removing those vents would make it instantly more viable, and then tweak it from there with playtests.

Good luck

[Lolko123]

Thanks for feedback I will try to do something what you said.

[Vaya]

I like the fact there is a slide. is that for the employees on their lunch breaks?