Tazer Posted June 9, 2015 Report Posted June 9, 2015 This is a competitive defuse map I've been working on recently. It is my first ever map and I'm looking to get some feedback. It takes place in a small village in Tibet that is actually a cover for a nuclear weapons facility in the mountains.This is still very much a WIP, though I am happy with the current layout and how the map plays. I have begun some detailing stuff here and there, and finishing up some changes that I wanted to incorporate. Any opinions or feedback are very welcome, as well as suggestions that you may have. Thank you for your time!Link: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=451611574 Quote
Tazer Posted June 9, 2015 Author Report Posted June 9, 2015 (edited) Here are some screenshots of the map: Edited June 9, 2015 by Tazer Quote
jackophant Posted June 9, 2015 Report Posted June 9, 2015 ar_monastery was originally called tibet. Valve renamed it for reasons, and I would probably advise you don't use the same name.Also, aside from the odd texture you've used, I fail to see how this resembles Tibet? (Tibet / Gothic Revival / Warehouse / Factory?)May I suggest you look more closely at some reference pictures? Vaya and VIOLATION 2 Quote
2d-chris Posted June 9, 2015 Report Posted June 9, 2015 Do you want ti bet this map is going to be fun? blackdog, ShockaPop, MaanMan and 3 others 6 Quote
LapnLook Posted June 10, 2015 Report Posted June 10, 2015 Also, aside from the odd texture you've used, I fail to see how this resembles Tibet? (Tibet / Gothic Revival / Warehouse / Factory?)The outside combined with the industrial inside kinda reminds me of de_sparity, mybe he's going for something like that Quote
jackophant Posted June 10, 2015 Report Posted June 10, 2015 @LapnLook Hopefully not, because Sparity was a thematic mess and this has even more concurrent themes. Trust me, it's not a good look... SirK, DooM and Vaya 3 Quote
Drakeee Posted June 10, 2015 Report Posted June 10, 2015 Yeah it doesn't scream 'tibet' to me either Quote
Tazer Posted June 12, 2015 Author Report Posted June 12, 2015 I'm actually looking for somebody who would be interested in doing thematic and detail work on my map. I have the layout and stuff like that down, but I have no idea what to do thematically. Quote
Quotingmc Posted June 12, 2015 Report Posted June 12, 2015 I'm actually looking for somebody who would be interested in doing thematic and detail work on my map. I have the layout and stuff like that down, but I have no idea what to do thematically.I would be happy to give you a hand. Just add me, same name as here Quote
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