TheOnlyDoubleF 1,125 Report post Posted December 22, 2014 (edited) Hey guys, I've finally done a clean portfolio! I'm following a 5 year training to game design & management (I'm in fourth year now) but I want to focus on level design.http://franckfitrzyk.com/I would love to get some feedback from you guys. Edited November 21, 2015 by TheOnlyDoubleF 1 Em' reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Furyo 360 Report post Posted December 22, 2014 Nice portfolio structure, and extra points for the Mapcore logo Maybe time to look at the indie scene for some extra experience? Check the post about DESYNC in the job section 1 TheOnlyDoubleF reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheOnlyDoubleF 1,125 Report post Posted January 26, 2015 (edited) I've rebuild my resume with more details.https://www.dropbox.com/s/gh9x4q7yf5meiur/Franck%20Fitrzyk_Resume.pdf?dl=0Still got to had more content in my articles. Edited November 21, 2015 by TheOnlyDoubleF Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ng.aniki 70 Report post Posted January 26, 2015 Just a simple thought after reading it: For me it looks too cramped and end up not confortable to read at all. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blackdog 4,443 Report post Posted January 30, 2015 Not sure I would go so far to put all those details in the interests section... if you had feedback from insiders ok, otherwise I don't see how those are relevant, should more explain why a certain genre of music/cinema contributes to your creativity(?) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheOnlyDoubleF 1,125 Report post Posted December 21, 2015 Hey guys, I've updated my portfolio and my resume. Would be cool to get new feedbacks Love. Portfolio http://franckfitrzyk.com/Resume Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blackdog 4,443 Report post Posted December 21, 2015 (edited) I've scrolled through the pdf file and just couple things:the references don't have an email either clickable or plain textScorsese's name is misspelled (it's ScorSese)I find heavy on the eye the use of m-dashes to separate the lists in the interests, what's wrong with commas? In general I think it'd be nicer to have some more line-spacing in the paragraphs, looks like you want to keep the document in the 2 pages, so I would remove the music+cinema mentions in the interests (as they are pretty varied, nothing really stands out like saying eg "fan of Korean horror movies") keep the interest one paragraph shorter (in vertical space) gaining precious space you could use to work on typography Edited December 21, 2015 by blackdog 1 TheOnlyDoubleF reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
