ART OF WAR

[DR@GONFLY]

Hi to u all

2 weeks ago i've posted this topic about my first map evver

http://mapcore.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1982

i have made some changes after the comment u peaple give me,

so i like to ask : DOES IT STILL LOOKS LIKE QUAKE 1 ?

yes = I kill myself

no = great and now ?

[Schmung]

NO, doesn't look like Quake 1. More like early Quake 3. Brushwork is alright in places, but it doesn't flow very well, your texture usage is erratic and often innaproriate and th lighting is very bland indeed. Looks like it might be somewhat fun in some of those screens, but visually it's very messy.

[MagicTMP]

^^^ I totally agree.

[mike-0]

Its so clean for hl2dm... usually hl2dm has shit on the floor.

[Lee3dee]

the title says "art of war", so I would think of broken walls, walls with big holes, dead bodies on the ground, generally an level filled with destruction. With the current progress, everything is clean. If you level is going to be about "war" then you need to dirty it up abit

[EraSerX]

looks like Quake2 now...

j/k

It's a different style than most other maps we have seen here.. which is good.. so keep working on it...

[rockdude86]

getting better everytime i see it

[Jezpuh]

Pay more attention during your English classes.

[Taylor Swift]

Pay more attention during your English classes.

Agreed on that term Jezpuh. :-?

Hey listen up, your map looks something better.

But you know, you could add some red lights too.

It will be better if you work more on the lighting at the moment now.

[DR@GONFLY]

you could add some red lights too.

It will be better if you work more on the lighting at the moment now.

yeah thats the next thing,

in the screens u can see see a prefiew of the

lightning but i am working on that now

[Minos]

Cool man, I really dig the old-school deathmatch atmosphere

keep it up

[xRYqX7pY2Kko2YBOCL]

I wonder what he is up to now with it. Any progress there?