de_manor (WIP name)

[untor]

Good day!

Here's a topic to discuss my map. Above the map worked for about six months, in slow mode.

I do not know what to call the card. Working title map "prodigy". 

However, the design and idea, you will see the mansion.

Here are a couple of new screenshots.

I hope for adequate feedback! 

[Vilham]

Looks great, would have to play it to see if it plays well.

[Em']

It really looks like those promo screens from Rise ! ^^

 

I think there should be more details and props laying on walls and grounds. Like tools, tubes, dirt, moss,electric poles etc... Anything that could fake the feeling of a real village, more than a "video game village" ! Just my 2cents, keep it up !

[General Vivi]

This looks just like an area of Disney I walked through a few days ago! !

[ElectroSheep]

For a classic inferno/italy themed map, it's wel done. i'm just not a fan of the buidling with different colors on them, each buiding should have one strong color only.

 

ex : https://pp.vk.me/c619422/v619422888/16d48/_7_naXgj9Kk.jpg

 

green/red and green/blue ones. You can't tell if they are real buildings or if they are a mix of severals.

[untor]

Small update

 

Bomb place A

 

Side

 

T Spawn

 

Middle

 

Soon I will plan to show map's overview (radar).

[jackophant]

looks beautiful, i love the lighting

[Squad]

I love it! Lighting is great, a big improvement since the first pictures you posted

[FMPONE]

The first two screenshots look excellent, when you start introducing more colors it gets a little muddled. Keep it dual tone (white +green) then introduce one very deliberate, very intentional color either via lighting or something else. Then I think you'll have an incredibly strong visual

 

(third and fourth screenshot = too many muddled, conflicting colors)

[RaVaGe]

I kinda dig the colors tbh, looks really summerish.

[untor]

Radar (WIP)

[Fabbo]

Great Work! I am not sure about the clothes line. I think it has not the same quality than the other details. Same for the wood pile on the last screen.

 

Wow the layout looks interesting. Cant wait to play it.

Edited October 5, 2014 by Fabbo

[untor]

Small update

Basement of the still dark, gloomy. However, on this I work. I want to strike a balance between darkness and playability.

Bombplace B

 

CT Spawn

 

Basement

 

Сonnection (From A pass on B)

(From T spawn)

Soon there will be a beta version of the map in the workshop

Edited October 5, 2014 by untor

[General Vivi]

Wow, this is looking great. Have we tested this on the mapcore playtests yet? We need to!

[Skacky]

Great shots!