TheLukas Posted August 19, 2014 Report Posted August 19, 2014 Hey, this is my first Map I've ever made so far, I worked more than 80 hours on this Map, but there is still some tweaking to do here. The Map is divided into 3 main Areas, the Cave ( Bombsite A). the Pirate Village (Middle) and the Factory (Bombsite B). I would really apreciate if you guys could give me some Feedback, Suggestions or anything that helps to improve this Map Workshop: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=296389855 Some Screenshots: Quote
FMPONE Posted August 19, 2014 Report Posted August 19, 2014 It looks like you have a good grasp of the editor, but the content of the map seems a bit whacky and silly. If that's what you're going for, cool. If not, you might want to try working with reference photographs will2k 1 Quote
TheLukas Posted August 20, 2014 Author Report Posted August 20, 2014 It looks like you have a good grasp of the editor, but the content of the map seems a bit whacky and silly. If that's what you're going for, cool. If not, you might want to try working with reference photographs Yeah it might sometimes not make actual sense, but I think it's more important to look good and fun to play on it Quote
FrieChamp Posted August 21, 2014 Report Posted August 21, 2014 What's with that sheet-metal-palm-tree-tower? Can you climb that? Quote
uLLeticaL Posted August 21, 2014 Report Posted August 21, 2014 Woa, it sure does look way better then my first map ever Maybe you could work on the lightning in the cave, the wooden structure on the left seems a bit too bright? Quote
TheLukas Posted August 21, 2014 Author Report Posted August 21, 2014 What's with that sheet-metal-palm-tree-tower? Can you climb that? No, it's just for the eye Woa, it sure does look way better then my first map ever Maybe you could work on the lightning in the cave, the wooden structure on the left seems a bit too bright? Yeah, I already removed it, I am doing some changes there, it will be in the next update Quote
FrieChamp Posted August 22, 2014 Report Posted August 22, 2014 What's with that sheet-metal-palm-tree-tower? Can you climb that? No, it's just for the eye It looks like a great first map and having a landmark in the map for navigation is a good idea, too. But from an eyecandy perspective it isn't working out, because it doesn't make much sense (to me). Again, looking good for a first map, but one piece of humble advice for the future: the environment in your map is telling a story, so you should ask yourself "does this look realistic? where is this object coming from? how did it get here?" or things will look out of place. Keep it up! Quote
TheLukas Posted August 23, 2014 Author Report Posted August 23, 2014 What's with that sheet-metal-palm-tree-tower? Can you climb that? No, it's just for the eye It looks like a great first map and having a landmark in the map for navigation is a good idea, too. But from an eyecandy perspective it isn't working out, because it doesn't make much sense (to me). Again, looking good for a first map, but one piece of humble advice for the future: the environment in your map is telling a story, so you should ask yourself "does this look realistic? where is this object coming from? how did it get here?" or things will look out of place. Keep it up! There are some background thought, so basically I thoguht of an old Industrial Area (Bombside B) which was left, was captured by Pirates who builded up their Harbour, village etc. out of the Factories Stuff and Trees. Quote
Jacqueline.anna Posted February 13, 2015 Report Posted February 13, 2015 I don't have too much time too design new levels every day after several hours. I do this in my free time, I love my hobby and passion. I know perfectly well that many Level Designers are better than me. Quote
kinggambit Posted February 13, 2015 Report Posted February 13, 2015 PILLOW FORTRESSSS! really nice for a first map. Quote
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