dm factory

[mike-0]

right now it looks like it's on an island, work on a 3d skybox with buildings and stuff.

[Taylor Swift]

Update 2. I'm half on the way so far, i'm not done yet. Not yet...

Random Corridor

*edited*

[st0lve]

You still have got that scaled up concrete (car crash one), it looks like crap insted of a nice texture.

[hamst3r]

You still have got that scaled up concrete (car crash one), it looks like crap insted of a nice texture

I noticed that too, also I personally think your windows look odd, it may be the scaling...or sumthin.

[Marcos]

The indoors looks way to hl1'ish.. Like the support beam in pic 1 and the vent in pic 2. There seems to be enough room in theese rooms to crate some fancy detail. The outside parts is starting to look really nice, but something needs to be done with the light_env. I would like to see some sunlight actually hitting some of the factory (at the top) like it really was sunrise..

[csharp]

Looks good, keep it high

[von*ferret]

you're doing much better. Keep going with it.

[RA7]

Ant BETA yet?..:-)

[DaanO]

I agree that things are getting better but the map still lacks subtlety (sp? ), especially in colors you used for grass, lights and what not.

[Jezpuh]

Why are that cars' lights on?

[JAL]

Getting better

[Taylor Swift]

Todays Report:

Incomprehensible?

Bargain for a Beta very soon!

But realize, if the map is going too large, i wont make the inside area.

So eventually my aim right now is to finnish the outside area.

But let me reveal something, I have plans to make some more houses around the factory.

If you want really the beta right now you can add me to the msn or "PM" me.

Thanks for your attention. Expect more screenshots very soon.

[MagicTMP]

the textures you have now... at least in my opinion... need to be changed up. they look too clean and together they make the map look cartoonish. try to look for some textures that look a little older and work them in.

[Taylor Swift]

## BETA 1 ## DM : FACTORY ##

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Don't be light-headed!

I'm taking it easy, i want that the people try out my map now!

#Do you think it will do any good?

#Is the appearance fine?

#Do i need to work on more?

#I need to improve maybye something?

I would like to know..So please write and tell me!

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Here is the map, but please comment on something.

I think i have alot to complete.

Here you are go and play it!

http://www.freewebs.com/nznexus/dm_factory_beta1.zip

**SAVE AS**

[Phlek]

Didn't play it but you made some huge improvement on the lighting, every new screen only looks better. I'll try it out later tonight.