sarge mat Posted May 8, 2013 Report Posted May 8, 2013 Hey guys Thought I would share my current project to get some feedback. It was also my final year project at University so there are some really crappy assets (the chair for example) I has to throw in quickly for the deadline that I want to re do now. Also want to make the view outside the window a lot more interesting and improve the lights and textures across the board. Anyway let me know what you think. Cheers Quote
Sjonsson Posted May 8, 2013 Report Posted May 8, 2013 Overall I like it, I think you should as some post-processing though. But maybe that's just me! Quote
TarrySruman Posted May 9, 2013 Report Posted May 9, 2013 That ceiling texture is really noisy and distracting. Try making something less busy and high-contrast so it doesn't draw the eye away from the rest of the scene. Really liking the wall texture though. Quote
knj Posted May 9, 2013 Report Posted May 9, 2013 i'm not sure about the colours, its to many in there, and it looksl ike 1997 game (if that is your goal - than ok i guess ) Quote
sarge mat Posted May 9, 2013 Author Report Posted May 9, 2013 Cheers the comments guys. I will look into all that stuff Quote
Dejavo Posted May 9, 2013 Report Posted May 9, 2013 the floor screws up the scale for me. A person sized to use the computers would get stuck with his feet in the floor. Hard to rest ones eyes in the scene. It might be to full bright. Foreground, middle and background are fighting for attention with lightning and colors. Quote
Wail Posted May 10, 2013 Report Posted May 10, 2013 the floor screws up the scale for me. A person sized to use the computers would get stuck with his feet in the floor. Hard to rest ones eyes in the scene. It might be to full bright. Foreground, middle and background are fighting for attention with lightning and colors. Agreed, particularly on the floor scale. I'd also mention that the vertical scaling of this scene seems way off. Everything looks squat and wide. Quote
sarge mat Posted May 10, 2013 Author Report Posted May 10, 2013 Thanks for the feedback guys, hopefully going to address those things over the next week. cheers Quote
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