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Great ambience! But what's going on in the down in the middle of the road where the yellow line gets blurry for a bit? Probably a pool of water or something but it looks out of place.

Posted

nice yeah the road looks unnaturally bumpy - I would also define the edge of the road by pumping up those lights, you'd get considerably more light from them, especially in the rain. All this shot is lacking is a little paralleling of depth and lines.

Posted

Thank you for the feedback everyone! Much appreciated!

@SpronyvanJohnson

Ahh yeah it's heat distortion from the drain. I'm planning to make a flythrough video for it anyway but yeah it looks exaggerated.

@2d-chris

the composition here still needs a lot of love. However, the main focal point of the scene would be long street with skyscrapers in the background.

Still very rough though.

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@Sentura, Psy

It is definitely inspired by Miami :) However the problem here is that I want to push it to something more vivid. Maybe some Hi-tech Bladerunnerish accents in the distant city? A lot of garbage and broken neons down here? Don't know if it works but I will keep experimenting.

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