GPointAnd Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 Very still much a WIP. Really have to work on lighting and more detail. Need to take up some of that empty space. Let me know what you think. Quote
Mazy Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 I dont really like the brushwork, looks pretty messy, try getting some more definition into the buildings instead of just slamming some plain boxes together Quote
GrayFox Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 I dont really like the brushwork, looks pretty messy, try getting some more definition into the buildings instead of just slamming some boxes together Amen. Quote
EviLTaxi Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 I think...you need a light source if you have light! and most of the buildings still look blocky...but since it's an early WIP I not gonna say anything else because ppl already tried to kill me because I criticised their WIPs keep up working on it! Quote
Tarky Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 It is a good start but it needs a lot of work. Good job with height variation etc, gives the player different levels which is always good. I say this all the time to people, don't be skimpy on the polygons, this is HL2 not HL so really get some detail in there. And also for the love of good please use smaller screenshots so I dont have to scroll for an eternity Quote
kleinluka Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 I just want to elaborate on what Mazy said.. Add some trims to your buildings.. And by that I don't mean flat textured trims but modeled/brushworked trims. The broken parts could use a lot more polys too... unless you want it to look like something from 4 years ago. Same thing with that strange.... hole that leads into something that looks like a sewer. It's almost SQUARE. Use more polygons!!! The whole thing lacks composition. You need to rounden the whole thing off. I'll see if I can post a detailed document on this later on for everyone to read. Quote
mike-0 Posted December 16, 2004 Report Posted December 16, 2004 For a broken down old destroyed town, theres not enough crap all over the place. Quote
michael_obrien Posted December 19, 2004 Report Posted December 19, 2004 what is that room with the water in it? Is it a sewer? Why is it... not... sewer shaped? It's just a box room with water in a shallow tile pool and a hexagon leading out of it. I'm confused. Quote
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