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Hey all! First time posting here, so I figured I'd throw up my portfolio and get this looked at right quick. I just revamped the layout and added some new content. I'm looking for critiques both on the content and on the site. Since I'm gonna be heading off to GDC in a few days, I wanna get this thing looking as presentable as possible.

http://tylerlovemark.com/

Thanks!

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Content wise, for a Level Designer position this is a fantastic portfolio. Very on-focus and it shows you're very design oriented as well.

You have a MP level, a CO-OP level a SP level and a sidescroller platformer, this is great and you're definitely going in the right direction to land a gig, so just keep on pushing forward!

Design wise, the page feels a bit old school, especially that banner (Ugly white font over a pale image), other than that great presentation, simple and effective, how portfolios should be!

PS. Also, gameplay videos on youtube ftw, good going mate!

Keep up

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Love the content, some great work throughout.

It's a basic site that serves it purpose just fine, it's easy to read and fairly clean I just have 2 subtle ideas for improvement

[*]The main one is just some alignment, the banner, the buttons, and then the content are all different widths - line them all up, or at least 2 of them centered so it all flows nicer

[*]My only other suggestion would be to drop the font sizes down on almost everything, and try and use real text where possible instead of graphics. It's just general usability and should be nice and quick to do.

I'm not in professional game development, just professional web development so take my opinions from that viewpoint - but personally id also like to see just a paragraph about you somewhere, even just on your resume - just to give it a little more 'personal' touch maybe.

Hope it helps

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Hey, just wanted to pimp out my portfolio a bit and get some feedback. I'm in the process of updating it and tweaking it, so I figured I'd see what bugs people about it so I can make some better judgments when it comes to changing things. I still wanna get the buttons sized down a bit and reorganized.

http://tylerlovemark.com/

Have a look and let me know what you think

Posted

Thanks for taking care of that for me. Based on some feedback I've been receiving, I updated the front page layout and fixed some issues within the project pages. I am in the process of finishing up my flat packet and getting that uploaded, right now I'm just using a placeholder one.

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