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[von*ferret]

Work in Progress. Adding detail and surrounding environment. Layout 100% done. Item and player placement 50% done.

[KidDynamite]

ha i totally pwnd u guys with that gun powz

[JynxDaddy]

very nice, but I'll have to play it to give some real crits/praise

[Minos]

Looks pretty nice fetter, but the lighting needs some work. And that kerb looks xtremely strange

[Tarky]

Looks fairly good !

[Spellbinder]

Looks great ferret.

I like the lighting in the first pic.

As JynxDaddy said one should really play a map before saying anything.

But it looks promissing at least

Spellbinder.

[skdr]

Looks cool m8!

As someone said, it needs lights. My suggestion is to use those cool spotlights to add some more detail to level

Anyway, change the env light a bit to it generates shadows to the environment

Keep going.

[Section_Ei8ht]

i agree. construction spotlights would do wonders for the map if properly placed. Me looks forward to more!

[von*ferret]

have already been done.

[RD]

this is definitely the best source map ive seen so far. And looks like it fits HLDM as well. Id add some more colour, brightness and a happy skybox.

Btw doesnt this belong in the hl2dm contest forum?

[Section_Ei8ht]

shouldnt you be asking what he is going to do with his prize money?

[von*ferret]

not entering this map probably.

[Fullauto]

I don't like it.

The colour scheme and lighting are very depressing. It looks like something you'd see in Red Orchestra. I'd prefer a bit of vibrancy to it.

[nico]

well, its rather limited how jolly a construction site looks...

i think it would be nice with the lights (looking forward to those screens),

and perhaps add more surrounding stuff, like other buildings and whatnot?

[Evert]

Looks nice so far.

Don't know what to say that others haven't, so I'll shut up.