WIP in WIP, post your level screenshots!

[KoKo5oVaR]

Yeah man that's really cool, i just love what you done with that house your lighting, and the sky.

My piece of critic tho : The trees in the background don't follow the same style than the house, i would have make something more angular and energetic than those round trees, same thing for the mountains, make them straight and angular . Also you could try make a serie of mountains with different colors to add more depth to your composition ! but that's really cool

edit : i didn't find any refs for the pine trees so i draw it myself

[-HP-]

Pretty cool BJA, although I'd rather see it properly textured, maybe TF2 style. I guess it kinda loose It's magic with ink'n paint!

[BJA]

@Mino: thanks

@Koko: hey thanks a lot for that little pine tree painting! will try to replace the ones I got right now and see how things look.

@HP: Actually it is "properly" textured...here's an example of the house texture: http://www.bja-design.de/different/comi ... iffuse.jpg

I think the lighting or maybe the dof I'm using blurs the textures a bit. But I kind of liked it, so I didn't try to change it.

[Pericolos0]

Thanks for the comments everyone. I should start working on some smaller props now, is it obvious i don't like doing that kind of stuff much?

I've painted a new sky (that you cant see much of in this pic) and did some polishing on the red building:

really considering going for a close up shot like this for the 2nd beauty shot now :s.

[Buddy]

You forgot the part about the thread name change

J/K. I really like it, it stands out from the rest because its not as busy which is really good. If you consider having a close up shot like this then work on the foreground elements, i would pimp some awesome looking foliage models since these are perfect for mid/far but not as a foreground element. Make it more evil!!!!

[Quakis]

really considering going for a close up shot like this for the 2nd beauty shot now :s.

Seriously, do it. It looks great at that angle.

[dux]

I preferred the other shots personally.

[-HP-]

It's fine, I love that kind of screenshot. Although, I'd avoid having the vegetation so close to the camera, (I'm talking specifically about the bush on the lower right, grass is OK)

[arhurt]

That angle is sweet and I think it works very well as your second option.

I'd tweak the bush closer to the camera to be more detailed and evil. Red thorns etc... And is there a reason thw shadow on that scaffolding going between the buildings is solid? Looks weird even if there is a reason (another "connection" that is hidden) so if that's the case consider moving it down or up.

But damn, you keep bringing better and better stuff each time!

[JohnSmith]

that's a really sweet work Pericolos0 (my preference goes to the first screen though, but second is nice as well)

Maybe you should add a huge planet in the sky ?(I dont know really why, but it might looks pretty cool and gives a more "unknown world" feeling)

[Sindwiller]

http://xs433.xs.to/xs433/08440/iteration24198.jpg

[Freak]

http://xs433.xs.to/xs433/08440/iteration24198.jpg

sure that the shadow comes from this metal thing?

[D3ads]

Amazing stuff Peris, love the style

[Freak]

I decided to move this map into this thread cuz it still needs too much work to call it finished, especially @ cliffs and desert..

[Sindwiller]

http://xs433.xs.to/xs433/08440/iteration24198.jpg

sure that the shadow comes from this metal thing?

*scratches head* hm... now that you mention it... It still looks really weird though