WIP in WIP, post your level screenshots!

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yeah, looks really really good. Very atmospheric!

Like sharp said: lighting could be improved a bit.

[mike-0]

I think the lighting is awesome! very moody

[⌐■_■]

I think it could fit the skybox better?

[nooba]

Thanks all

Btw, where is this located? Anywhere specific?

Nowhere specific, it is just a fictitious village somewhere in France..

Seems like a cool start, i really like the look of the second screen with the wall on the left, you should add some buildings behind it, high enough for mgs or sniper to cover the bridge

I will be adding some buildings behind the wall. The bridge is the Allies spawnpoint But, I will experiment with your suggestion

Again, thanks

[Oski]

How about a high tower to the church?

[neotic]

[Meotwister]

looking pretty good. . . kinda vast and open/desolate. You could throw some more stuff in there to make it not seem so empty. Seems really cool.

Need to work on the fog.

[dc-mike]

@ neotic

Outside needs the most work imo, windows to the buildings and breaking up the texturing of that gray/yellow building in the background would be a good start i think..

The area outside the mainbuilding(?) is much to open, for that ground texture atleast... Maybe add some small buildings for security or something?

Also needs some props... lightpoles, electricity thingies (cant remember what they're called) perhaps?

As for the inside theres not much of it in the pics, but from what i can see you should try it out with less natural light and slightly yellower light from the fixtures as there arent any windows that i can see which would let the natural light in.

Also, build cubemaps, doesn't look like you have judging by the couch inside.

[neotic]

Thanks alot guys, been dying for feed back. The killer part is that, its based off a real building that is quite vast and desolate. I mean, its primarily an inside map, what you see outside is entirely limited by that fense. I agree, more props would be good but I guess I'm scared of killing video cards! heh. If it weren't a real place or the guy that I'm making it for allowed me to fudge more extreme stuff this would be a lot easier hehe.

dc-mike: I'll try that with the fixtures, and yeah, that couch needs a closer cube map for sure - surprised I missed that.

/thanks.

[Zacker]

You can improve the transition between fog and sky a lot in the first picture. Take a look at the buildings in the background, you will never see anything like this.

[Grinwhrl]

I would have to say work on making the lighting better and the fog distance. Go with a bright sky and a hot beating sun. It should reflect the white on the building better and give it a shaprer look then how faded it looks now.

Also since you are captureing a realstic place and theme there isn't much more you can do about the space. This is why when making maps don't try to go to realisitc becuase it becomes boring but in your case this is a project for school right?

Add a few metal tables on the side of the walls in the first show to give more dpeth. Maybe even put some upside down chairs on them to.

[IR]

nother screen did some adjustments to the "main" field for some better vis blocking and an extra route for both teams through the building,

each team has a "balcony" overlooking the field

[Polaris]

Its looks good, but what exactly are those two lumps?

[TomWithTheWeather]

Its looks good, but what exactly are those two lumps?

Vis blockers? or maybe boobs. I think they are boobs.

[Tequila]

Boobs containing MG42s to stop spawn-camping/for hilarious purposes.

Or mounds of hay.

You choose.