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Looks like a nice start kokoz! I personally don't like her hair... it looks too bulky! The ear is also badly positioned. She also needs a post-apocalyptic mutt.

Can't wait to see this in full colors and with a nice background ^^

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the eye path is exactly the other direction as you painted it for me.

I'm afraid i have to agree :( , better next time.

Mino, 2d-chris; thanks for the critics guys

composition, lighting and textures are great but I'm not to keen on the character design, kind of hard to tell what it is at first glance.

Maybe i should really put some colors in there to make her more readable, is it because of the nuances or because of the character design itself ?

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Not sure really character design isnt my thing but if I had to say it would be ...

1) The legs, I can't really work them out (maybe make the shoes stand out more they kind of blend into the sand)

2) The hair is bigger than mine, maybe a cowboy/girl hat :D

3) the goggles at first I thought where her eyes

4) the bag got my attention first, rather than the character ... maybe thats a good thing?

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