City17: Episode 1

[The Horse Strangler]

Been working on some more thing's here and there with my project, wanted your guys feedback!

Screens:

[Acumen]

Im totally loving the lighting - such a nice atmosphere !

[Freak]

yeah, really great lightning

[e-freak]

lighting is great, brushwork and texturing could use some second go (mainly details afaik tell from those tiny screenshots)

[The Horse Strangler]

Which Screen in particular?

[e-freak]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3084/310 ... f14174.jpg - the ceiling is kind of weird broken and the walls could use some vertical break horizontal bar) but maybe that's just me

[The Horse Strangler]

Ah yeah, that is the way it is due to it being stairwell, although I do agree that the steps could use some more random orientation.

[dux]

Brushwork looks fine to my eyes.

[RA7]

nICE ATMOSPHERE INDEED

(damn capslock)

[narby]

I guess I'm in the minority, but I don't like the lighting that much, it feels very monotone somewhat flat. Little bit too much yellow and too bright outside - The outside rubble part in picture 4 is nice though, the telephone poles are a nice touch.

The fire in the third picture could use some wood/rubble/crap to hide the point where the particle meets the ground. Also, the walls in the stairwell could use bit of color, maybe a stripe covering the bottom half of the wall, just something to break up the flat grey concrete.

Other than that, good stuff.

[The Horse Strangler]

Hmm I agree with the breakup in look, perhaps a bottom half Border. Otherwise a lot of the screenshots do have a lot of Warm safe lighting. I should have gotten a bit more of our Darker colder areas.

I'll add some of those in a bit later today.