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Kaiserwiser

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  1. The first paragraph/ first page is where you can best communicate "this is why you need and want me", so basically you're looking to punch them in the guts with your victories within the first few seconds. I would advocate for adjusting your landing page: 'Robin-Yann Storm, excellent level designer', your links, and a hero image (of you giving a presentation, or an excerpt from your best project). And generally adjusting the language a little (though this is a cultural consideration): eg "below is a small selection of videogames..." Sounds like a low sell (again, depending on the culture it's aiming at) and I think you'd be better off leading with a 'fine' or 'distilled' selection of your best work. This, after all, is your greatest hits album.
  2. "Free tip for you bro: 95% of women on dating websites are on there for a reason. They're all fucking mental." Adverse Selection. Although the rule would also apply to men
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