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Sjonsson

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  1. Looks delicious! I know it's such a minor detail but the white cloth in the tunnel which you put red in looks a little out of place since it looks so clean. That's the only thing I caught up ^^
  2. That's better! Looks nice, I might try it out!
  3. This looks so sweeet! MOAR SPRITES!! <3
  4. I will only give feedback about the Level Design since I really don't know very much about photography. The first thing I though about was that there was no information on what YOU specifically have done on the parts of level design. Right now, I think it looks more like a portfolio for a Level Artist. Put some texts in there about the screenshots, what you did and your ideas behind them. Also, include a top-down if you made any, either of the level or the paper-planning.
  5. Wow, Abyss looks so cool, really gives me some Atlantis vibes! I'm so gonna check it out some day!
  6. Heya Kosire! From the screenshots the map looks pretty interesting but you really should attach a high-res top-down too, makes it a lot more interesting to look at.
  7. Haven't played it yet so I'm just gonna comment on how it looks: and it looks just brilliant! Nice work guys!
  8. Hello guys! My name is Stefan Jonsson and I'm a Level Design student from The Game Assembly(http://www.thegameassembly.com/). I am just about to start looking for an internship this coming autumn. Here's my portfolio, not entirely finished but a lot of it is. http://www.stefan-jonsson.se Feedback is very much appreciated! Best Regards, Stefan
  9. The first thought I had was that the images are small and that the sizes of all text boxes and stuff are unnecessarily big. I'm guessing that Behance.com is some kind of a service for showing off your portfolio and resumé and that sure can be good, I just believe that you would be more attractive from a viewer's standpoint if you made a website with image slices following the standard patterns.
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