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  1. Updatetime. Most of the puzzles are still missing but thats my mistake. i like the design phase a bit more so i often set the "lame" stuff at the end. I know my work flow is flawed because every change I make in the end can result in mayor optical changes :-(

     

    Also these areas are not pollished in any way. its the sheer size of this map ... Well less then 3 weeks to go...

     

     

     

     

     

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  2. My2Cents

     

    as far as i can see: The sky is very bright, your map is dark. (what is your light_environment set to? It should be at least at 400 and in the color of the sky)

    Your yellow light is too much. Use a more desaturated version. Also when you use a yellow light, use a yellow light source. As seen in the first Picture. You used a yellow light but the Lamp is obviously white.

     

    http://cloud-2.steampowered.com/ugc/469792325941858432/C56B5FF6D7E9C32010A2FA906E7B9795FA6439EA/637x358.resizedimage All your office-lights are floating below the ceiling. This model is concave, place it in the ceiling or at least put a brushed border on the side of the lamp.

     

     

    Also place / add env_cubemaps. Without cubemaps all the geometry reflections are disabled. (ofc you have to build the cubemaps afterwards ingame).

     

     

    I like some of your geometry but you can work a bit more on your z-axis. For instance add vents to break up your scene.

  3. as a noscript user i find it a bit irretating that your portfolio needs all these json files. Or let me rephrase this: If i disable js i have a blank white page.

     

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  4. 9eKLrwol.jpg It's my first weapon model (ever) I made. it took round about 6hrs for this highpolygon model with floating geometry (normal map). Its a bit long but my last model i made is several months old. I also want to unwrap and texture the weapon (lowpolygon version).
  5. I updated my 4hrs Map it now Includes the following things:

    + added spawning-rooms for both teams

    + added Overview

    + added soundscapes (Sounds)

    + added custom models and sky

    + added wooden covers

    + added Decals / Overlays! yay

    ~ changed the brightness of the map

    ~ changed a few spawning positions

    ~ changed the team skins (visibility)

    ~ edited / optimized all Lightmaps

    I also made some custom models and a custom sky for this map. Feedback appreciated,

    http://steamcommunit...s/?id=146388906

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  6. Hi there,

    i want to show you two projects. One made yesterday the other thing were just laying around for a longer time (at least a few months). Both available in the Steam Workshop:

    Dustfloor (name and layout by "Matrix")

    made for an older speedmapping competition and my old personal cs:go playground. Thats said I don't like the layout or the gameplay and i don't have time to finish things. Soo better than nothing:

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    Download and more Screenshots:

    http://steamcommunit...s/?id=141719933

    Drainage

    also made for a very small (only two persons) speedmapping contest. It took me 4hrs to finish the map and another 45min to compile and upload he whole thing. Its still unfinished but I think its the best i could do within the given time. HDR, Soundscapes, Decals are missing. Gameplaywise i would change some spots but the rules are that we both are not allowed to change the maps until next week.

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    Download and more Screenshots:

    http://steamcommunit...s/?id=146388906

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    It's the first "human like" head i've ever made. It took me one day and a lot of tweaking to get the head at this stage. I used a concept art made for our computer animation. I don't know if i will ever finish this head because i used it to study a technique...

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    I also made this room (also for the ca). Its for a night scene in an older villa. Props like the childs bed (mentioned a view pages before that) are missing.

    I've used the vray Renderer in version 2.3 for 3DSMax 2013.

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  8. use more displacement. For example make every single step with two displacement faces. Bend the middle a bit and make it nonsolid. After that you can and should add for instance a playerclip brush over it. It looks smoother but is no gamebraker.

    It would be also nice if you use sprites for the ground. Give everything more volume. Also tweak the fog.

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