EraSerX

looks like Quake2 now... j/k It's a different style than most other maps we have seen here.. which is good.. so keep working on it...

There is nothing wrong with posting your first map, how else can you get help and look for suggestions?

I think they'll make it too realistic/strategic for me to actually like it

Leveldesign/Scripting

I like it, it's a Work In Progress © but it looks promessing...

Looks very nice.. I am bit scared about the FPS for the outside sections, but I am sure you'll keep it playable.. Lighting in the generator-room is ubersweet...

Interesting map, but needs a lot of polish and tweaking. Some parts are just ugly (some staircases) , look too empty or could use some extra detail. I think the flow of the level is a bit limited, and there where some dead ends... I also found a place where there is a train near a loading dock which had some invible collision blocking the player.